Reason not to like ICEL-style English: collects

Troubling is a grammatical shift that becomes more and more pronounced the more recent a text you look at. Old BCP prayers tended to take the form “O {name} who {did thus and so}, grant our prayer {in this wise}, etc.” (exactly what the Latin originals say); but more recent ones follow the bad RC convention of saying “{Name}, you {do thus and so}....” The construction tends to put one in the position of telling God what he does, as though you can give him orders.

– C. Wingate

Does the improved Ordinary Form (Novus Ordo) missal in English fix this?